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You! (This poem is kind of my baby, had t for years. Btw, looking for pointers on the last line)

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You’re never lost, but always found
You’re always free, and never bound.
You have a way, so light and carefree-
You don’t have to try, but you’re better than me.
You inspire greatness, and never try;
You don’t have wings, but always fly.
You get people to care, yet you are carefree.
You’re blind to hate, but always see.
I’d never admit it if people asked,
But given a choice, I’d give it all back.

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