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The Princess who made me mad

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The Princess who made me mad
Posted: 2011-12-31 08:07:55

like the form and story content, but it would be so much better if you didn’t use the same rhyme for each line.
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The Princess who made me mad
Posted: 2008-11-08 05:23:43

I used to be a strong fellow
A gentleman and a hail-fellow

But in her presence I always mellow
Then turn pale yellow
Then orange yellow
Then cadmium yellow
Then canary yellow

To my friends I?ve become an odd fellow
In the league of cranked heads who run and bellow
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