Posts Tagged ‘making profile shine’
Monday, March 7th, 2011
Article Subject: Good ice-breakers for online singles and personals - Part 9
Dr. Dato’s Brief:
Some of the things you can talk about are what interests you such as photography or dancing. Say something related to more on the subject like “I go for a weekly meetup on this photography course and we go on a hike to Diablo Mountain and take some spectacular landscape shots of the east face”.
In dancing, you could say something like “I really love salsa dancing and have been doing it for about 5 years now and I also joined a local dance troupe, which really kept me in shape, blah, blah, blah”. You get my drift.
Writing like this excites the reader and when they see something like this it invokes a sense of feeling in the other person. Also, it can reveal something about the other person, passionate about a hobby, interesting and not a couch-potato. If you don’t have a hobby or interest of such kind that invokes passionate feelings within you, then you really need to go out there and find something that does!
Let’s now move to some technical aspects of your writing style which is a must if you want yourself to shine in other people’s eyes.